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- Some very good analysis of the music videos. With specific examples used to illustrate your points.
- A relatively low amount of waffle!
- Good visual examples included for most of your posts.
- You have made an excellent effort on some of your posts, including screen grabs to illustrate your points. Keep this up, and if you can, do it more, it will pay dividends!
- Range of different music videos these are clearly well chosen and you've included youtube versions on each entry. This is good.
EBI.
- Make sure you complete all entries! There are some which should have been completed by this deadline. Check your list.
- Check your entries over before you submit them, you use the word "bolky" by which I think you mean blocky?
-One way to do the analysis which may provide more insight is to divide it up into the micro-elements, and then come up with an example for each of them.
-It would make it slightly easier to read if your do break up your entries into more paragraphs.
Effort: GD
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